tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5793357676692567098.post1001452393057266373..comments2023-05-22T03:32:04.633-07:00Comments on Meguriaeru: Dive into Dusk - Chapter 1 (Updated as of April 26, 2010)Kouenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07441281924505826435noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5793357676692567098.post-52921012285763544182010-04-28T04:28:53.539-07:002010-04-28T04:28:53.539-07:00It's okay to be in denial Mittens.
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*...It's okay to be in denial Mittens.<br />*Pat pat*<br />*Cuddles*<br /><3Kouenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07441281924505826435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5793357676692567098.post-42546368344858753542010-04-28T01:13:10.460-07:002010-04-28T01:13:10.460-07:00......There should never be a need for tiny talkin.........There should never be a need for tiny talking oranges. D:<<br />THEY DON'T EXIST DAMNIT.MichiruSenkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14767621098174091309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5793357676692567098.post-86090548673126168182010-04-26T21:15:48.268-07:002010-04-26T21:15:48.268-07:00Yeah, I guess I'm writing the script for a vis...Yeah, I guess I'm writing the script for a visual novel. But that'll never get accomplished! Where am I going to get character designs? Backgrounds? Music? Sound effects? Voice acting? Tiny talking oranges?!Kouenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07441281924505826435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5793357676692567098.post-50368766200653777522010-04-26T21:05:55.676-07:002010-04-26T21:05:55.676-07:00I shall put pink banners and unicorns hopping arou...I shall put pink banners and unicorns hopping around on it, with flowers and rainbows and butterflies all around~<br /><br />=o<br />It's not a bad start, a bit cliched but not a terrible read. I wouldn't mind reading more.<br />:3<br />It's a bit bare though, as if you're writing the script for a game scene. Summaries for those usually feel a bit...empty? or hollow as you read it because it looks more complete with pictures or the scenes taking place at the same time.MichiruSenkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14767621098174091309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5793357676692567098.post-11650202191590593652010-04-26T20:30:10.623-07:002010-04-26T20:30:10.623-07:00Meh screw it, prologue got too long and it's t...Meh screw it, prologue got too long and it's the first chapter now. :|Kouenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07441281924505826435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5793357676692567098.post-76448294786350778902010-04-26T20:06:23.568-07:002010-04-26T20:06:23.568-07:00I decided to splice part of the first chapter into...I decided to splice part of the first chapter into the prologue. That way we can get the cliffhanger out of the way as the unknown girl does all the magibabble talk.Kouenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07441281924505826435noreply@blogger.com